Friday, November 14, 2008

Composition

Here are the pictures I wanted to use for this weeks composition project! I had a lot of fun with this project:





4 comments:

Annie said...

great location! is this the place by smithfield? #1 is my favorite

Unknown said...

great pictures I LOVE them!!

Alexis said...

These are beautiful, Kristin! You did a great job with the creative compositions, great location, and natural poses. They all look good as far as exposure, clarity, and lighting.

Critique: (This is "HHCC" - hard-hat-constructive-criticism.)

Watch carefully for distractions behind the subject - especially behind the subject's head. In the second photo there is a lock that my eye is drawn to when I look at the young lady's face. In the third image, the placement of the windshield and light on top of the truck also are somewhat distracting from her face. The first image might be a little better if it was cropped a little tighter. Rather than almost chopping her head and chopping her arm in an awkward place, cropping in would draw the focus even more to her face.

Leslie said...

These are Fierce. Love your style!

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